Critique
I don’t think you should end a poem with
“My life has changed.”
~Noah Berlatsky
You don’t think about what you say.
I don’t say what I think.
The perfect marriage.
~Nolcha Fox
purple flowers
all over a pine forest
oblivious wife
~Tejendra Sherchan
the dead are still here
plants overwatered, underwatered, forgotten
~Steve Van Allen
Give light, Sun
What to do? How to walk steadily?
Do not know the blunt skeletons
And
very often get morbid.
I come across them and get sad
But I do not put forward my hand
Rather ask the Sun to come out of the clouds
And give them light so that
They can stand erect and walk.
~Partha Sarkar
The great struggle of writing
is to see the truth
in your bank account.
~Noah Berlatsky
The Net Equivalent
of
standing
in the kitchen
wondering why
u walked
in there
is going to Google
but forgetting
what you were
planning to search for
~Keith Snow
falling in love with the transplant surgeon
she whispers, "take my hand"
~Morgan Ellington
night duty
the hushed whisper
from behind
~Bidyut Prabha Gantayat
stuck in traffic
a billboard promises
relief
~Nalini
Shetty
autocorrect
my opinion reshaped
without consent
~Nalini Shetty
two-factor authentication
proving
I still exist
~Nalini Shetty
dystopian dreams—
the future
they warned us about
~Nalini Shetty
mono
no aware
new moon
or noon awe
no more now
~Scott F. Parker
university
yes
uni
verse
i yes
visit
yes
~Scott F. Parker
unsolicited
advice to self
pay attention
to what you're paying attention
to
~Scott F. Parker
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