Afternoon of September 7, 2024

Critique


I don’t think you should end a poem with

My life has changed.”

~Noah Berlatsky




You don’t think about what you say.

I don’t say what I think.

The perfect marriage.

~Nolcha Fox




purple flowers

all over a pine forest

oblivious wife

~Tejendra Sherchan




the dead are still here

plants overwatered, underwatered, forgotten

~Steve Van Allen




Give light, Sun



What to do? How to walk steadily?

Do not know the blunt skeletons

And very often get morbid.

I come across them and get sad

But I do not put forward my hand

Rather ask the Sun to come out of the clouds

And give them light so that

They can stand erect and walk.

~Partha Sarkar





The great struggle of writing

is to see the truth

in your bank account.

~Noah Berlatsky




The Net Equivalent


of standing

in the kitchen

wondering why

u walked

in there

is going to Google

but forgetting

what you were

planning to search for

~Keith Snow




falling in love with the transplant surgeon

she whispers, "take my hand"

~Morgan Ellington




night duty

the hushed whisper

from behind

~Bidyut Prabha Gantayat




stuck in traffic

a billboard promises

relief

~Nalini Shetty




autocorrect

my opinion reshaped

without consent

~Nalini Shetty




two-factor authentication

proving

I still exist

~Nalini Shetty




dystopian dreams—

the future

they warned us about

~Nalini Shetty




mono no aware


new moon

or noon awe

no more now

~Scott F. Parker




university


yes

uni

verse

i yes

visit

yes

~Scott F. Parker




unsolicited advice to self


pay attention

to what you're paying attention

to

~Scott F. Parker

 

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Morning of September 3, 2024


 


 

 


 



 

 

 

 

It’s in the Bones

~Kelly Moyer

Photos available here




do not see me…


I am the face

of undecided


I have not picked

my story

yet

~Sharon Ferrante




the poetry

of the lake

each breath

strikes the shore

alone

i paint

on empty rice paper

kilroy on a wall

feeling poetic

i slide into a chair

and start snoring

~Mike Rehling




collateral damage a spirit snake swallows its tail

~John Hawkhead



war footing the final bill

~John Hawkhead



crunch time cicadas taste like shrimp

~Sharon Ferrante




24 hour rolling news

I teach myself to see

things that aren’t there

~John Hawkhead



 

types of North Woods trees: deciduous, conifer, Big Foot

~Roberta Beach Jacobson




What I've learned

Summer flies are assholes

Fighting in the air

~Sarah Mahina Calvello




Labor Day

our union local president

goes into labor

~John J. Dunphy



 

only child

I am

the sibling

of myself

~Roberta Beach Jacobson



 

causation/correlation

i flip a coin

in the name of science

~Mike Rehling




I’ve decided


tonight

shall be simple


I’ll visit

the ocean

scream at it

~Sharon Ferrante

 

 


Morning of August 30, 2024

 

Naturally

~Kelly Moyer

Photos available here




bark hole —

safeguarding

our secrets

~Daipayan Nair




cosmic mandala

surrounded by the living

dead

~Deborah Karl-Brandt




Insomnia


You get so much done

when you’re dead.

~Noah Berlatsky




solitude

unasked for, unwanted

white noise of grief

~Jennifer Gurney




curtain call

the bees prepare

for their final encore

~Melissa Dennison




autumn wind here we go again

~Keith Evetts




how the months fly by vacuum cleaning

~Keith Evetts




barcode yeti calder’s batmobile

~J. D. Nelson




needles to say s

~J. D. Nelson




neighbour of nothing I keep it

~J. D. Nelson



cryptocurrency the look on grandma's face

~Keith Evetts




Say we’ll go to the ocean

then I’ll come

That is, if we go to the ocean.

~Wenyi Xiao




with a flu

she played the flute

a little cute,

a little coo.

~Marcus Ten Low




soon, the moon,

it will begone.

duck.

~Marcus Ten Low




The sea was supposed to give me revelations.

I listened and listened

it had the sound of an empty shell.

~Wenyi Xiao




sad and lonely haikuist's whoopee cushion

~Keith Evetts

 


 

Afternoon of August 27, 2024


when the Milky Way Galaxy was above and below the chained dipper

~Patrick Sweeney




the high anatomy of chewing vegetable roots and gazing at stars

~Patrick Sweeney




out

of

time

&

hyper

space

earth

no

longer

earth

~Randy Brooks




Hang On!


Moon age

day dreamer.

~Keith Snow




Earth again at last

herds of bison keep

radio silence

~David C. Kopaska-Merkel




a snake vanishes—

gravity pulls it down

into the black hole

~Suraj Nanu




the cake exploded

the guest of honor briefly

surprised by the claws

~David C. Kopaska-Merkel




zydeco deathmatch

another busker thrown

to the gators

~David C. Kopaska-Merkel




"how could they be so dumb?"

child asks his parents

after watching historical reenactors

depict racism

~John J. Dunphy




monsoon at the end...

ants trailing thins out

in my bathroom

~Tejendra Sherchan




pest control

she brooms the salesman

off the porch

~Randy Brooks




I heard that there was a paradise.

But we wouldn't have it anymore.

Some idiot would have lost it.

~Marie Derley




a man’s shadow...

shrinks and vanishes

as he leaves the light

~Tejendra Sherchan




The blunt skeletons in sharp competition


The cloudy morning.

The three-wheelers are rushing breathlessly

To catch more passengers.

I watch and watch day by day

The blunt skeletons in sharp competition

And correct a geography lesson-


Every day the sun rises in the west.

~Partha Sarkar



buttonholing perfect strangers with observational irrelevancies

~Patrick Sweeney




we had tsetse flies and H-bombs when I was your age

~Patrick Sweeney




in her quiet way, she answered all my Chinese destinies

~Patrick Sweeney




already dropped

so many shoes

~Roberta Beach Jacobson




active crime scene crumbs of the cupcake lady

~Roberta Beach Jacobson




Haiku Dilemma


I must rearrange

the poetry books. Alas,

I’m not ready yet.

~Noah Berlatsky




Mahout

just off the Pennsylvania Turnpike

the yellow straw

~Patrick Sweeney




father said to son while counting the change in his pocket:

please don't breathe

~Mykyta Ryzhykh


(Originally published in Pate Journal)




although asphyxiation was improbable,

a full congregation

simultaneously exhaling

~Patrick Sweeney

 

Afternoon of August 24, 2024

Ozone

~Kelly Moyer

Photography available here




I Am Old


Yet though the miracle

of imposter syndrome

eternally young.

~Noah Berlatsky




Ignorance Together


I am glad to have been married

twenty-four years

to someone

who can’t remember

our anniversary either.

~Noah Berlatsky




leftover bay leaf

on my meal plate...

I eat only its scent

~Tejendra Sherchan




Irene


to the untrained eye

she may appear average

but Irene

hides a box of 8-tracks

in the attic

~Roberta Beach Jacobson




housed in thrift store basement secondhand allegations

~Roberta Beach Jacobson




Critique of Pure Raisin



bran

baby

bran

~dan smith




condemned house

its lead-based paint warning

written in pencil

~John J. Dunphy




shuttered nuclear power plant

its grounds aglow

with fireflies

~John J. Dunphy




gaps in

papyrus

rolls


endless space

for genius

~Bob Carlton




clearing sky

the crunch of snails

underfoot

~Bob Carlton



Morning of August 21, 2024

OG

~Kelly Moyer

Photography available here



the idol's lips move

the mob pummeled

with pink noise

~Richard Magahiz




fifty fathoms down

signatures in

triplicate

~Richard Magahiz




creeping dust children

their eyelashes

needle-sharp

~Richard Magahiz




To tea

Or not to tea

That is the question

~Susan L. Pope




loggerhead

so many versions

of king lear

~Jerome Berglund




analysis: the architect has an edifice complex

~dan smith




while waiting

for the brake job my headache

gets run over

~Robert Epstein




Sunday laundry

round & round

the argument goes

~Robert Epstein




summer dying I become shale

~Joshua St. Claire




now I have it

now I don't

my death poem

~Robert Epstein




Jane ear

Jane hare

Jane heir

~Jerome Berglund




as I make coffee

you swirl amongst my thoughts

the scent of hazelnut

~Jennifer Gurney




we

are

not

going

back

~Jennifer Gurney




After the heinous crime


'Dead population is shouting for justice...'

'Let them do so.'

'They are demanding investigation'

'Let them do so. One day all crime will be hushed up.

One day the dead population will be much more dead.

Then I will allow them to slogan "Long Live revolution '

~Partha Sarkar




rain arrow hang the jury

~Jerome Berglund




The riot


Trapped my soul

In riot.

Is my neighbour

Enemy?

~Partha Sarkar




Labor Day parade

unionized strippers march

in their work clothes

~John J. Dunphy




root vegetable

if a pill could alleviate

poverty

~Jerome Berglund




to your third eye

touch the Pole Star

act quite human

~Richard Magahiz




western civilization

a mass-produced 1000-piece puzzle

of Starry Night

~Joshua St. Claire




black eye

of the two-stripe grasshopper

telescope to a moon

~Elliot Diamond

 


grunge cosmos —

stardust

on my lips

~Aly Droyd